6.09.2007

Reddition (Il est s'insistant!)

J'ai visité le péché
chez lui
hier
c'était luxuriant
et plein de
trésors
que les murs ont été peints
le violetet
il y avait
la moquette sur
le péché de plafond est si original, j'ai pensé,
regardant autour
du péché marché vers moi
souriant
tout ceci pourrait être le vôtre
il a chuchoté
si vous juste vous rendriez
il a appuyé une clef de maison
dans ma main
il a brûlé ma paume


Translation:

Surrender (He's So Insistent!)

I visited sin
at his house
yesterday
it was opulent
and full of
treasures
the walls were painted
purple
and there was carpet
on the ceiling
sin is so original, I thought,
looking around
sin walked towards me
smiling
all this could be yours
he whispered
if you would just surrender
he pressed a house key
into my hand
it burned my palm

8 comments:

AVIANA said...

NIce to put french poetry on here. I'm a native french speaker. pleasant surprise.

yes it is very tempting....and i surrender constantly

Rich Fitzgerald said...

you and sin - umph, umph, umph

dc_speaks said...

lol...heyyyyyyy, MF!!!

the key burned into your palm? that was absolutely riveting. I'm constantly warring with sin, so I can relate.

That was amazing, MF!

Mizrepresent said...

I'm liking this Sin series...great job!

KIKI said...

I let my moms read this today...and you definately have a new fan...she's called me twice already talking bout..."what's that web adress again?" I do believe she's hooked...was already ordering a copy of the book for myself...guess I'll have to make it 2!

Nice work, lady!

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