1.06.2008

Bicoastal

his name feels
fresh on my tongue
my delusion, but real
ancient but young

left and right
loose and tight
black and white
day and night

darling, he sighs
an answered why
his truthful lie
certain and shy

the torrid balance
of well planned chance
this one-word sentence
his heavy glance

owning legions of lovers
between east and west
conceal and discover
my worst, his best

6 comments:

CapCity said...

Wishing U a GREAT 2008, GirlyGirl! I see U doing it & doing it WELL!

nikki said...

i love this one! flows like water from the lips

T-Mc said...

I would love to HEAR you speak these words.

Unknown said...

Still on your game! Great piece!

Mizrepresent said...

Oh that was tight Saadie, "owning legions of lovers"...i like that!

Rebecca said...

Boats Sail On The Rivers

(1)

Boats sail on the rivers,

And ships sail on the seas;

But clouds that sail across the sky,

Are prettier far than these.

(2)

There are bridges on the rivers,

As pretty as you please;

But the bow that bridges heaven,

And overtops the trees,

And builds a road from earth to sky,

Is prettier far than these.

-----by runescape gold