Enigma
Afterwards, I feel electric
An eccentric heretic
Erotic
Even tantric
I remember his voice
My decision, my choice
Sweetheart, he chants, bi-coastal brilliance
Dependent on my nonchalance
Texts that read ready
Make me instantly heady
Heated
My inhibitions deleted
Unfamiliar, foreign
Cellular Superman
Would his touch be as infernal?
Branding flesh--clues external
He releases me always
Without a gaze
Only praise
I exit, amazed
16 comments:
ohhh, you so nasty
I forgot to add my name, that was me.
Rich in the STL
i likes...
i likes...
Damn.
What are we talking about here?
I didn't think Dave was traveling this week
Still a flirt, now it's just in cyber space.
All the guys came out for this one.
Flirts are innocent.
Girly Girl is a tease.
All right, Everyone.
Rich and Lance, as always, thanks for your comments. They always make me smile.
Mr. Admirer, I think you can probably figure out what we're 'talking' about if you read the rhyme again. But, with any piece of writing, it is open to the reader's own interpretation.
Bill J, what are you doing reading my blog? Why aren't you on the golf course? Whether or not Dave is in or out of town is irrelevant. The thoughts that I have posted have been bumping around in my head for quite a while.
And, finally, Anonymous...oh, Anonymous. Everyone is entitled to their own opinion. You definitely do not try to hide the way you feel about me--for that, I have to give you credit. I would give you more credit if you posted your comments under your real name.
I know all about you, Saadia.
The golf course is too wet with melted snow. Plus your blog is much more interesting.
Don't worry, your secrets are safe with me. Always.
Keep telling yourself what you want to hear.
Friends close, enemies closer.
Deny, deny, deny.
Love is a battlefield.
All's fair in love and war.
I forgot one
ADMIT NOTHING
I guess this goes along with deny, deny, deny, but I would rather be safe than sorry.
Tired of my cliches? I've got a million more.
hmmm, who could anonymous be. got any ideas?
Guess what, we really don't give a fug who he is.
As Lance would say (got to give a brother credit up in this piece)- Real Men don't hide, they pimp!
I love that!
Rich in the STL (still having log in problems)
Girly_Girl your words are so smooth and down right seductive. I love your talent.
Anonymous...u must be someone who really wants Girly_girl and she wouldn't give you any play. She is to much of a lady.
A tease she is not...so bow down to the Goddess in your presence.
Dawnya
Thank you, Dawnya, I am so thankful for you in my life!
Girly_girl...u are family!!
Dayum....that was hot!!!
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