Chaos
thoughts tangle
like unbrushed hair
questions quarrel
like school children
hurt hardens
like an ice cube
reason runs
like an athlete
inside of me
Note to reader: read this poem the way it's supposed to be read...
3.25.2007
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from the flow of your words..your poetry is not in chaos
it seems rather to be more focused than you think
lol...im first, MF!!!
wow, GG! were/are u an english teacher who's specialty is poetry? when i read your stuff mine feels like thoughts that are too short to call prose, so i call it a poem. Your poems always seem to be tight w/entendres & innuendos that fit into specific poetry patterns that I learned in school & forgot!
thanx! lovin' it!
@DC "first is the worst, second is the best, third is the one that follows the rest..." u pro'lly too old to remember that rhyme;-). LOL!
i like the quick breakdown of the mental pictures, like...immediately you see then it quickly fades away as you continue to read. like a flashbulb going off...."POP!"
Goodness, there is really much useful material here!
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